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A hand unclenching/
A sudden rise/
Flashing emerald
against unblinking blue/
We cannot help but wish
to clutch another in free-fall/
Even certain death is better
than uncertain drifting
toward uncertain destinations/
Yet still we rise ever higher
the safety-net of oxygen long-gone
with the memory of solid ground/
Yet still we rise/
A sudden rise/
Flashing emerald
against unblinking blue/
We cannot help but wish
to clutch another in free-fall/
Even certain death is better
than uncertain drifting
toward uncertain destinations/
Yet still we rise ever higher
the safety-net of oxygen long-gone
with the memory of solid ground/
Yet still we rise/
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I wanted to try something different with the form of this poem. I don't think it really worked, but I figured I would share it regardless and let you decide for yourself. That's the tricky thing about experimental forms, really; oftentimes, the words being conveyed end up pushed aside in favor of the form itself. Hopefully, that didn't happen here at least, but we'll see.
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Each line is full of purpose and holds powerful meaning. I especially loved this last line. Very potent. Lovely work, my dear.